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My drafted idea in digital form. I think it turned out pretty neat. Hope to have it printed next mother's day or mom's birthday. :)

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Love you mom by DezignerDude

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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

First off, I apologize for my late response. Things have been happening. Anyway, to the critique!

This is a major update. It looks more glossy, with more of a digital appearance, much in contrast to the other which was more traditional art. In a way, it reminds me of neon lit cities like Las Vegas. Believe me, I've been there, and that's what I'm getting from this. It sort of suggests that you're broadcasting your love for your mother in bright letters. That's pretty nice.

At the same time, maybe it's a little bit too flashy. Perhaps when it comes to parents, I like things to be not simple, yet not overly exotic, either. Something tasteful like the previous image I reviewed is what I look for. Don't get me wrong, this is still incredible. It's just I prefer the other.

On the plus side, I love the hot pink and bright blue shades around the letters and on the butterflies. That's the sort of subtlety I look for.

I'd say my main criticism of this would be the DA watermark in the middle of it all. It just takes away so much from this whole image. Even if I'd rather have the previous image, this one would be so much better without the giant watermark in the center.

Overall, I wouldn't say this is worse than the other. It's just different. It's like chocolate versus chocolate with some caramel in it. Take your pick over which one you want. I think they're both lovely. This one still works. Nice job.